Sunday Snippet – Crossing the Line – One Hell of a Favor
Welcome back for another Sunday Snippet, part of the Weekend Writing Warriors meme.
Today’s eight-sentence excerpt is from my new release, CROSSING THE LINE. Derrick and Hanna have been together ten years. Derrick and Jeremy have been friends since third grade. And Derrick just asked Jeremy to help him give Hanna a very hot birthday present.
Here’s what Jeremy had to say…
“Say you do this threesome thing. You really think that when the moment comes, pardon the pun, you’ll be okay letting somebody else touch Hanna? Watching your wife get wild with another guy? Because once it’s done, it’s done, no going back. It could fuck up your relationship permanently.”
“It won’t. Not if you’re the third.”
“I’m not sure if that’s a credit to my loyalty or an insult to my masculinity.”
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5 Comments
Veronica Scott
Yes, good observation on Jeremy’s part. I’m glad he’s not just agreeing without pushing Derrick to think it all the way through – see how real your characters have gotten to me LOL? Excellent excerpt!
Millie Burns
Awkward turtle…Jeremy’s got a good head on his shoulders to really question his friend.
Tina Christopher
Love the dialogue! Great snippet!
S.J. Maylee
Ha! That’s hilarious. Fabulous snippet. Captivating and it made me chuckle. 🙂
Cara Bristol
I’m almost halfway done with Crossing the Line. SO sensual. But you’re a tease! You’re taking your sweet time getting the threesome together. Can’t wait to find out what happens. For some reason, I feel sorry for Jeremy.