Sunday Snippet – CROSSING THE LINE – Reprieve
Today’s Sunday Snippet is dirty. There, you’ve been warned. Or promised, however you choose to look at it. 🙂
Make you sure you check out the other offerings from the Weekend Writing Warriors, too, some of which will also be dirty. I know this, because I read their books. Now, on to the snippet.
This is a tiny morsel from CROSSING THE LINE, a married couple ménage story (among other things). In case you haven’t been following along, or read the book (and if that’s the case, why ever not?), Derrick and Hanna are married, Jeremy is Derrick’s lifelong best friend, and he’s joining in for one very hot weekend.
Hanna’s hands landed on his hips. Electricity rocketed through Jeremy’s body at the first touch of her lips on his shaft. He wanted to look. To watch his cock disappear into her mouth. But it was too much, too hot.
“Now do Derrick.” The command rasped out. And thank god she obeyed, because he needed the reprieve.
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Blurb
Lifelong best friends Derrick and Jeremy met Hanna at a bar ten years ago. Both wanted her—one married her. Now the other man has been invited to join in for one hot weekend.
Everything would’ve been fine if they’d had their fun that weekend, then gone back to normal. But they didn’t. And when past demons resurface, things will never be the same—for any of them.
9 Comments
Charmaine Gordon
You warned me but I couldn’t stay away. I liked the heat in short sentences. No need for endless descriptions when you accomplished this hot eight.
A.S. Fenichel
Yummy! I love this book.
Millie Burns
Whoa, hello! Steamy for sure.
Veronica Scott
HOT stuff…excellent excerpt! (Fans self, rereads snippet…)
Sarah Cass
Holy hotness batman…yum. Love his weak attempt at control. Great 8
Eleri Stone
This is such a hot book. And so much heart too:)
karladoyle
Thanks, Eleri 🙂
J.A.
Holy Moly! It took me a while to read your 8 sentences because you had me at the hot, hot, HOT cover. And I’m with Charmaine…the short description was much more evocative and generated just the right amount of heat. Well done, Karla.
Pete Symes
A reprieve often leads to a welcome and boisterous reprise. I like it.