Sunday Snippet – CROSSING THE LINE – The Meat of the Matter
Welcome, it’s Sunday Snippet time, part of the Weekend Writing Warriors meme.
Today’s eight-sentence snippet is from CROSSING THE LINE. A reader left the most amazing review of Crossing on Amazon this week, and it reminded me how much I love this story & these characters.
In this snippet, Hanna, the heroine, is talking to her best friend about the weekend trip she’s embarking on — which happens to be a threesome weekend with her husband and his lifelong best friend — but Megan doesn’t know who the “third” is. To appease her nosy friend, Hanna is describing the guy.
“He’s a bit over six feet with short, dark hair. A strong nose—”
“Wait — is that a nice way of saying he has a big honker?”
“It’s not that big.”
Megan’s eyebrows rose. “I hope you won’t be saying the same thing about his cock a few hours from now.”
“Oh my god, you’re horrible.” Yet Hanna couldn’t help laughing. Leave it to Megan to get to the meat of the matter.
Blurb
Lifelong best friends Derrick and Jeremy met Hanna at a bar ten years ago. Both wanted her—one married her. Now the other man has been invited to join in for one hot weekend.
Everything would’ve been fine if they’d had their fun that weekend, then gone back to normal. But they didn’t. And when past demons resurface, things will never be the same—for any of them.
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8 Comments
A.S. Fenichel
I don’t think she’ll be disappointed in any parts of him. 😉
Gemma Parkes
Wicked girls! Funny snippet, great dialogue.
Maggie Wells
Odds are she won’t be saying the same thing later. Great snippet!
Sarah Cass
LOL! OMG, you totally made me giggle-snort with this excerpt! I love it! Great dialogue between the friends.
Alexis Duran
Fun dialogue. Great way to up the anticipation.
Millie Burns
Ah ha ha, love the last line Karla!
Veronica Scott
Maybe her friend is a bit jealous? Either way, their conversation was terrific, great snippet!
Teresa Cypher
Great dialogue. Very natural and flows well. Funny last line!