Sunday Snippet-Write Club 03/03/2013
Welcome, and thanks for stopping by. Today’s snippet is part of the Write Club meme, hosted by the lovely and talented Skye Warren. You can find a list of the participants here, and if you haven’t read any of Skye’s books yet, you absolutely should, so click here to check them out.
Today’s six-sentence excerpt is from my current WIP, a former-friends-to-lovers story whose hero and heroine lost contact for thirteen years before reconnecting. In last week’s snippet, Matthias was seated in the diner where Caroline works as a waitress, appreciating the view. (Find previous snippets here, here and here, chronologically.) This week’s offering follows shortly after last week’s, with Caroline taking his order.
“I’ve never eaten here — what’s good?”
“Fries and gravy.”
“That’s your suggestion in a Chinese food restaurant?”
Some things hadn’t changed. He’d watched her eat fries and gravy in the high school cafeteria nearly every day for five years. Even from two tables away, the process had been agonizingly erotic — her tongue darting out, swirling around the length of a fry, scooping the gelatinous brown goop with its tip… good god.
6 Comments
Skye Warren
Um, wait a minute, are we dealing with childhood crushes and second chance romance here? Because you know that’s ma favorite 🙂
A.S. Fenichel
Holy crap! That’s quite the picture you’ve painted. I’ve never seen fry eating quite that way and I may never see it the same again. LOL
Linzy Antoinette
I don’t know that I can watch anyone eat poutine the same way ever again. 🙂
Stevie Carroll
Great six there!
S. J. Maylee
I want to curl up with this book. Each snippet has hooked me. Oh, and I completely agree about Skye, I love her voice.
Kate Meader
Good god indeed! Very evocative, Karla.