• Excerpts,  Sunday Snippets,  Work In Progress

    Sunday Snippet-03/10/2013

    Welcome! Today’s eight-sentence snippet is part of the Weekend Writing Warriors meme. Click that link for a complete list of participants.

    I’m continuing with a bit from my current WIP. Childhood friends Matthias and Caroline (who both harbored deep crushes but never declared their feelings) are meeting for the first time in thirteen years. Matthias has a lot on his mind.

    Matty — nobody else called him that. Not ever. The affection in her voice sliced at his resolve to keep her at arm’s length. Memories of the other times she’d used the nickname floated to the surface. Always innocently, but so damn sweetly. Had things gone differently back then, she wouldn’t be waiting tables in this shithole today. She’d be living like a queen. His queen.

    That’s it for now. Have a great day, and thanks for stopping by. 🙂

  • Sunday Snippets,  Work In Progress

    Sunday Snippet-Write Club 03/03/2013

    Welcome, and thanks for stopping by. Today’s snippet is part of the Write Club meme, hosted by the lovely and talented Skye Warren. You can find a list of the participants here, and if you haven’t read any of Skye’s books yet, you absolutely should, so click here to check them out.

    Today’s six-sentence excerpt is from my current WIP, a former-friends-to-lovers story whose hero and heroine lost contact for thirteen years before reconnecting. In last week’s snippet, Matthias was seated in the diner where Caroline works as a waitress, appreciating the view. (Find previous snippets herehere and here, chronologically.) This week’s offering follows shortly after last week’s, with Caroline taking his order.

    “I’ve never eaten here — what’s good?”

    “Fries and gravy.”

    “That’s your suggestion in a Chinese food restaurant?”

    Some things hadn’t changed. He’d watched her eat fries and gravy in the high school cafeteria nearly every day for five years. Even from two tables away, the process had been agonizingly erotic — her tongue darting out, swirling around the length of a fry, scooping the gelatinous brown goop with its tip… good god.

  • Body of Work,  News

    New Book Contract!

    I’m very excited to announce some news… Last week, I accepted a contract for my next book, BODY OF WORK, with Ellora’s Cave.

    When I started writing this story last fall, I intended it to be a short, hot novella. The characters had a lot more going on than originally planned, and it wound up a 70k novel. Oops. Oh well — more sex! More angst! More banter! I hope you’ll enjoy it.

  • Sunday Snippets,  Work In Progress

    Eight Sunday-02/24/2013

    Sunday Snippet time. Today’s eight sentences are part of the Weekend Writing Warriors meme. Click over for a full list of this week’s participating writers.

    Today’s excerpt is from my current WIP, a contemporary erotic romance. Matthias and Caroline were unlikely best friends — a gangly nerd from a family who had next to nothing and a constant class favorite, the beautiful daughter of a well-to-do family. Each harbored deeper feelings for one another, neither brave enough to share them before graduating high school and losing touch for thirteen life-altering years.

    The first two excerpts are here and here. Today’s snippet also comes from the early pages of chapter one, as Matthias sits in a booth where Caroline is waitressing.

    The kitchen door swung again as she reappeared in the dining room. She cut a straight path toward him, and he sat back, enjoying every second. The gentle curves she’d had in high school had lived up to their promise. Nice, full breasts on display in a low-cut, pale-pink sweater. The apron cinched around her waist accented her hourglass curves. Too bad she was wearing jeans. He’d love to see those legs again. How many times had he stared down at them during class under the guise of looking at his binder — her skin temptingly bare below the edge of a short skirt, her knee brushing his as they huddled over an experiment in the physics lab.

     Thanks for stopping by. Have a wonderful Sunday. 🙂

     

  • Giveaway

    Winners!

    It’s Family Day here in Canada. I hope everybody is enjoying some time with people they cherish, whether family by blood, happenstance, or choice. 🙂

    Now, the winners! Yes, I’ve drawn two names, since everybody was so totally awesome about commenting, tweeting and Facebooking my Publication Anniversary post. Thank you, all, so much!

    I assigned each comment, tweet, share, and re-tweet an individual number and plugged the entries into Random.org.

    The winners are:

    Jessica Subject and S.J. Maylee

    Again, thank you, everybody, for sharing my anniversary!

    ~Karla

  • Game Plan,  Sunday Snippets

    Eight Sunday-02/17/2013

    Thanks for visiting! Today’s eight-sentence snippet is part of the Weekend Writing Warriors meme. Click over for a complete list of participants.

    Since February 15th was my publishing anniversary (there’s a giveaway if you follow that link), I’m sharing eight from my first novel, GAME PLAN.

    Oh, the nervousness and agony of a first date, especially when you’re forty and the man beside you is…significantly less.


     

    “I’m older than you,” she blurted.

    “I’m taller than you.”

    “I have a twelve-year-old son.”

    “I have a one-eyed cat.”

    “You’re just making fun of me now. Your cat has nothing to do with this,” she said, motioning between them.

    “Neither do the other things. None of them affect how well we’ll match up.”

  • Game Plan,  Giveaway

    Publication Anniversary! with Prizes!

    February 15th. One year ago, my first book was published. GAME PLAN, a 78k contemporary erotic romance released in digital format from Ellora’s Cave.

    Mind if I bore you for a few minutes? Then I’ll get to the giveaway details, because I know that’s why you’re really here. 😉

    Here’s the history behind my debut novel:

    Early in 2011, I applied for a conference grant to attend RWA National in NYC. I rewrote that single-page letter so many times. Mailed it off and forgot about it, believing I didn’t have a hope in hell of scoring such an opportunity.

    In April, my husband chased me (as I walked down the street with my dog) to hand me the phone. One of the nice ladies from the RWA office was calling — out of hundreds of applicants, my letter had been chosen for a grant — 1 of just 7 awarded. I’d never been to a conference, nor spoken face to face with another writer. I had two small kids and I’d never spent a single night away from them. And I was going to NYC to mingle with over 2,000 publishing types.

    Since fate had decided I should take writing seriously, I stepped waaay out of my introverted comfort zone. I booked a pitch appointment with an editor for Ellora’s Cave…for a book I hadn’t finished writing. Call that ‘mistake’ number one. Since I already followed her on Twitter, I DM’d her that I’d booked an appointment with her. Newbie mistake number two? Probably. But she was very friendly and chatted to me about EC and the conference. Eventually, I stopped hyperventilating.

    Until she sent me a message. It popped up while I was out walking my dog. (Note: great things happen while walking the dog!) The message contained four simple words. “What do you write?” kd-vanna-feb2013

    After sweetly chastising me for not having any samples of my writing on my website, she invited me to send her the first chapter of my (unfinished, ack!) book. About a month later, she requested the full (as soon as I finished writing it…).

    That same opening chapter won the LERA contest in the erotic category, and a second editor requested the full. Shock. I had it.

    I accepted a contract with Ellora’s Cave, and my fabulous editor, Grace Bradley, in November of 2011.

    GAME PLAN was the second book I completed, but it was the first I submitted, ever, anywhere. Because I’m a chicken, and have tendencies toward self-sabotage. Mostly because I’m a chicken. From here out, I will try to keep my chicken on the dinner table. 🙂

    So, that’s how I got published! To celebrate, there has to be a prize, right? Enter by leaving a comment here (any comment will do), or tweeting this post (make sure to tag me in it, so I enter it in the draw), or sharing this post on Facebook (ditto with the tagging thing).

    In honor of multiples (the standard for erotic romance heroines), the winner will have their choice of the following prize options:

    EC-GiftCard

    1. A $10 gift card for your choice of Ellora’s Cave, Amazon, Kobo, or Nook. (International)


     GP-paperback

    2. A trade paperback copy of GAME PLAN (Canada & US only)


    gameplan_msr OR morethanwords_msr PLUS dairy-milk-pretzel-pb

    3. A digital copy of either GAME PLAN or MORE THAN WORDS, plus, my favorite chocolate bar in the whole world, which should come with a mouthgasm warning, it’s that good. (Canada & US only — for the chocolate bar portion)

    Giveway closes Sunday, February 17th at 11:59 p.m.

    Winner will be announced & notified on Monday, February 18th.


    Let’s recap!

    To win:

    • Leave a comment here
    • Tweet this post & tag me in the tweet (I’m @Karla_Doyle on Twitter)
    • Share the post on Facebook & tag me in the post (I’m KarlaDoyleAuthor on Facebook)

    And the most important thing to recap…always go for your dreams!

     

  • Excerpts,  More Than Words

    Valentine’s Day, More Than Words Style

    bw_heart-40pxHappy Valentine’s Day, all. The most romantic day of the year. Who has exciting plans they’d like to tell me about? I’m all ears!

    In honor of V-Day, I thought I’d share part of the Valentine’s Day scene from my August release, MORE THAN WORDS. I can’t post the whole scene, because of spoilers, sorry! I hope you enjoy this little nibble. 🙂


    “Lock up, would you, I’m going to do a read on the till.” Calli ran the daily sales report, eyes bugging at the numbers. “Holy crap, Cait, we sold as much today as the Saturday before Christmas.”

    “Love is in the air. That, and the promise of hot Valentine’s Day smexing.” Caitlyn stood, hands on hips, surveying the disastrous state of Romance U after their banner day. “It looks like the place has been ransacked—by dozens of horny men and women.”

    Calli laughed. That about summed it up. “Let’s leave it until tomorrow.”

    “Whoa. You feeling sick, boss? You never leave the store a mess. Never.” A perfectly waxed and shaped eyebrow lifted in Calli’s direction. “You’re planning on bailing. I’m onto you, Cal. You think you’re going to wiggle out of our plans and spend Valentine’s night cleaning the store.”

    Busted. “Yeah, about that…” A handful of panties bounced off her blouse.

    “Start folding. You’re coming with me tonight. No bailing, no wiggling. Not this time.”

    “I’ll go next time, I swear.”

    “Great. But that doesn’t change the fact that you’re going tonight.”

    Half the table was already in order—Caitlyn’s half. The woman was a panty-straightening machine.

    “It’s Valentine’s Day. You should be hooking up with some hottie, not dragging your pathetic older sister out for an unromantic dinner.”

    “Since I don’t have one of those, I’m not.”

    “You don’t have a hottie on the go? That’s a first.”

    “Nice. You make me sound like a man-eating slut…which I am, more or less.” Caitlyn snagged the pile of lacy boy-cut panties and shooed Calli from the table with a wave of her long, hot-pink fingernails. “I have a hottie lined up for later, don’t you worry. What I don’t have is a pathetic sister. Just one who needs to come with me tonight, so hurry up with all your paperwork. We’ve got primping to do for our eight o’clock reservation.”

    * * * * *

    Leaving her apartment after dark got easier each time. With Caitlyn’s nonstop chatter distracting her, it’d been a piece of cake. The Caitlyn Yates effect.

    The restaurant Caitlyn had chosen for their sister-date was in the old factory district by the river. A trendy spot, all of the brown-brick buildings had been converted to shops, restaurants and bars, high-end services. The remodeled facades screamed pricey. The packed parking lot told Calli people were okay with that.

    “You doing okay?” Caitlyn hooked an arm around Calli’s. “You’ve got that spacey look. Is this too much, too soon?”

    “No—no, I’m fine. I was guestimating what the price per square foot might be for one of these units, what the lease terms are and if this area will continue to boom or if the popularity will wane in a couple years.”

    She didn’t laugh, but Caitlyn’s smile stretched as wide as physically possible. “You really are fine, aren’t you?”

    The inky sky with its sparse dotting of stars didn’t wrap her in a blanket of terror. Voices from patrons in the parking lot didn’t make her jump out of her skin. “I think I am.”

    “Perfect.”

    They entered through a set of heavy double doors. Whoever owned The Stacks had done a fantastic job. They’d preserved a lot of the building’s character, incorporating some of the old printing-press equipment into the restaurant’s theme, both as décor and repurposed pieces. The original high ceilings over the bar and stage areas contrasted with the false beams that’d been added to make the dining sections more intimate and cozy. Lots of metal and concrete fixtures lent to the industrial feel. Rich accent colors, textured fabrics and dropped pendant lighting with colored-glass shades added warmth in all the right places.

    “This is incredible.”

    “Just wait, it gets better,” Caitlyn said as they slid into their seats. “First of all, the food is unreal. I had the chicken marsala a couple of nights ago—my mouth had three orgasms.” The too-cute-for-his-own-good host chuckled under his breath, a big mistake around a predator like Caitlyn. She made no bones about checking him out, head to toe. Even licking her super-glossy lips at him before dismissing him by looking the other way.

    “He was cute. Kind of had that Mediterranean loverboy vibe you like.”

    Caitlyn shrugged and flipped through the menu. “I’m not here to pick up.”

    “Whoa…” For effect, Calli grabbed the table with both hands. “I think the world just tipped on its axis.”

    “Ooh, my sister the smartmouth is back. You’re buying me an eight-dollar martini for that dig.”

    To think, she’d wanted a way out of this evening. Thank god Caitlyn had bullied her into coming. Calli reached across the table and squeezed her sister’s hand. “I’ll buy you a pitcher of martinis, dinner and dessert. Thank you. For everything.”

    “I love you, Cal. I’ll do any- and everything in my power for you—remember that.”

    They talked and laughed through dinner. She’d missed so much the past two years, but no more.

    The last spoonful of dessert called to her from the edge of the table where she’d pushed it. She ignored it. No room for one more bite in the body-hugging skirt she’d chosen. “Oh my god, I’m stuffed. I bet I consumed ten thousand calories. I may have to cut this skirt off because I doubt I’ll get out of it otherwise. But I did have multiple mouth orgasms, so I guess it’s a fair trade.”

    The lighting dimmed and the background music faded. A new smile spread across Caitlyn’s face. Satisfied, almost devious.

    “The live music is about to start. Maybe you can work off some of those calories later.”

    If Caitlyn thought she could get Calli onto a dance floor, she’d definitely had one too many Tanqueray martinis. There was taking control of her life, and there was making an ass of herself while attempting to have rhythm. Calli was in for the first one. Full stop.

    “I’m not dancing.”

    “Okay,” Caitlyn said.

    Hmm. Agreeable enough, but that smile hadn’t gone anywhere. What the heck was her sister up t—

    “Hey, everybody. Happy Valentine’s Day.”

    Calli’s breath caught. No need to turn around, she’d recognize that voice anywhere.

    “I’m Travis Graham, and I’ll be serenading you diehard romantics tonight.” Somebody in the restaurant wolf-whistled. The mic amplified Travis’ sexy laugh. “Some of you may not need serenading, by the sounds of it.”

    Goose bumps rippled over her skin as the first notes from Travis’ guitar drifted over the speakers. He was playing. Not pulse-pounding rock with Black Box and not in a huge club, but he was playing.

    “He’s really good. Better than he was with the band, in my opinion.” Caitlyn’s words burst the silence at the table. “It was fate that I found him. Or coincidence, take your pick. I was here on a date and voilà, your boyfriend took the stage.”

    “Coincidence. And ex-boyfriend.”

    “Semantics.”

    “He is good.” The guilt over his injuries wasn’t gone, probably never would be, but somewhere inside, the tension she’d been holding on to eased. Now she needed to hold back the tears. “He’s why you brought me.”

    “Well, duh, yeah. It’s a nice place, and I love being able to go out to dinner with you again, but when I heard him singing the other night, I knew it was time for you to stop moping and fix things.”

    “I’m not moping, I’ve even been dating.”

    Caitlyn rolled her big blue eyes extra-exaggeratedly. “Puh-leaze, I’ve seen you get more excited about a cup of hot tea than the guy you’re dating.”

    Fine, so Joe had been gap-filler. That didn’t mean Travis hadn’t moved on with somebody else—or multiple somebodies—or that he forgave her for ruining his career with Black Box. And it sure didn’t mean he wanted her back.

    “Did you talk to him—does he know anything?”

    “I doubt he even saw me. But does he know that he’s in love with you…? Now that’s a hell yes, judging by the song he sang the other night.”

    Hope had no business swelling in her heart. “He sang a song about me…was my name in the lyrics?”

    “Listen and find out.”

  • Sunday Snippets,  Work In Progress

    Weekend Writing Warriors-02/10/2013

    Happy Sunday, all. Today’s 8-sentence snippet is part of the Weekend Writing Warriors meme. Check out all the participants on this list. 🙂

    This excerpt is from my current work in progress, near the beginning.

    He refolded the printout and tapped it against the steering wheel. Last chance to be the bigger man. The good guy. He could start the car and drive back to Toronto, no one the wiser. Delete the email. Ignore it. Forget about it, about her, like he’d done thirteen years ago.
    As if he’d ever forgotten about her.